10A- Elevator Pitch 1


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  1. UnknownOctober 6, 2017 at 3:04 PM

    I really liked your hook at the beginning of your pitch! I thought you were very persuasive with your proposal and successfully convinced the target market to use your service. Moreover, when you said that the fees were included in the marina, it didn't make it sound like a big price hike which made the idea of using your service more enticing.

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  2. UnknownOctober 8, 2017 at 11:22 AM

    I think your business idea is a strong one. I think you could have dressed up a little nicer, maybe just have a button-down shirt on. Other than that, I feel like you could have explained more how many boats there are per marina and how much of the money you would make per membership to the arena. This would show the investor that he has a way to make money if he invests in you.
    But overall a great first elevator pitch.

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  3. UnknownOctober 8, 2017 at 4:37 PM

    I think your elevator pitch was really good! You spoke with confidence and expressed your idea clearly. I think it's pretty hard to convey everything you need to to be able to pitch a business well in 60 seconds, but you did a good job! nice work.

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  4. UnknownOctober 8, 2017 at 8:33 PM

    You do a great job explaining your product and what it is! You really portray your emotions and how much you care about its success. You present the information clearly and confidently which always helps in a presentation.

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