17A- Elevator Pitch 2

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wt4fzWFUCwM&feature=youtu.be

The feedback that I recieved from my original elevator pitch was mostly positive. One person told me that I should dress nicer, so I put on a suit jacket for this elevator pitch.

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  1. You did a good job with this pitch. You talked very slowly which is good for having everyone understand what you're saying, but sometimes it seemed a little too slow. You looked very professional and explained your product well. Overall, you did a good job.

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  2. I liked the way you pitched your product in this. I think your idea is good, and you conveyed information well. I think if you changed the pace of the video it would be easier to follow, but the information was easy to absorb all the same.

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